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近期「干货来了」栏目将持续为诸位持续奉上名师Jessica带来的托福写作精评特辑,大家多多关注。这个夏天,和托福分手!今天给大家带来的是6月18日和7月4日的题目,品真题,学词汇,名师带你完胜托福!
2016年6月18日托福写作真题
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:A: To be a successful person, one must open up to new ideas and willing to change his or her mind. B: People should be open to new ideas and change his or her mind to be successful.
>>>名师点评
People should be open to new ideas and change his or her mind to be successful.(2015.12.10)
类似考题:
「2008.1.27」
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than holding on to the things that they have done well.
>>>解题思路
A卷出现了绝对词 must, 需要进行弱化并给出其他让人成功的合理方案。
成功要素:
1)专业素养 professionalism
2)恒心 persistence
3)明确的目标 clear vision
第一段可以采用让步段的结构,虽然愿意接受新想法和保持一个开放的心态是成功的要素之一但不是必须的。
B卷是建议类,可以从be open to new ideas的好处出发
1.愿意接受新想法和保持一个开放的心态是一种重要的沟通技能
Being willing to accept new ideas and having an open mind is a crucial communicational skill.
2.愿意接受新想法和保持一个开放的心态是与人合作的前提
Being willing to accept new ideas and having an open mind is a premise for cooperation.
3.愿意接受新想法和保持一个开放的心态是实现自我提高的帮助
Being willing to accept new ideas and having an open mind is a stimulation for proving oneself.
>>>词汇拓展
1.inspire and motivate 激励和感染
2.foster creativity 培养创造力
3.selfless traits 无私的品质
4.leave a legacy 留下宝贵的遗产
5.close oneself from learning 固地自封
6.an open mind drives success 开放的心态带来成功
7.offer unvarnished advice and feedback 提供不加粉饰的建议和反馈
8.solve personnel problem or vexing issues 解决人事或棘手的问题
9.gain a heightened appreciation for different communication styles 更好的接受不同的交流方式
10.commit to action 付诸实践
11.be open to all possibilities 接受一切可能
12.personal growth 个人成长
13.effective communication 有效的沟通
14.be a good listener 做一个倾听者
2016年7月2日托福写作真题
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships.
>>>名师点评
Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships.(2012.9.2 大陆)
类似考题:
「2012.12.22」
The friends that you can have fun with are more important than the friends that you can get help from.
「2012.2.25」
Two people can become good friends even if one of them has more money than the other.
>>>解题思路
这是托福写作热门话题之一,友谊类。 限定在了朋友之间,那么可以从竞争的性质,朋友的性质出发去思考。Agree:1.朋友之间的竞争可以增进友谊,亦敌亦友competing with friends boosts a friendship rather than tainting one2.朋友之间的竞争会给原本紧张激烈的过程增加趣味competing with friends add more fun to the intense process3.朋友之间的竞争不会有负面影响因为存在互相了解和尊重的前提competing with friends won’t cause negative effect because of the understanding and respect among each other
>>>短语拓展
1.generate motivation 产生激励
2.learn from the enemy 向对手学习
3.rivals or competitors竞争对手
4.a strong and respectful relationship 一段坚强有有尊重的关系
5.mutual respect 相互尊重
6.give friends credit for victories 赞扬朋友的成功
7.knowledge received transform into admiration and respect 得到的知识转变成仰慕和尊敬
8.be friends off-the-clock 在业余时间做朋友
9.be bitter rivals as competition starts 在竞争开始时做对手
10.avoid letting competition taint friendship 避免竞争破坏友谊
11.real gem behind 背后真正的价值
12.dull and intense process of competition 枯燥和紧张的竞争过程
13.develop friendship out of rivalry 在竞争中产生友谊
14.different from those derived from mentoring relationships 和教导型关系衍生出得不一样
15.involves a great deal of learning from each other 有很多互相学习的过程
>>>明星老师介绍
拥有多年教学经验的Jessica,纽约州立大学布法罗分校教育学硕士。长相甜美,和蔼可亲,曾在美国纽约一所社区大学任ESL老师,曾任职纽约一所教育机构,负责课程教材等编辑工作。
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